Friday, 5 August 2016

NARRATIVE ESSAY :WRITE A STORY ABOUT A BAKER WHO FACED SERIOUS CHALLENGES IN HIS INITIAL BUSINESS BUT EVENTUALLY FLOURISHED AND BECAME SUCCESSFUL

NARRATIVE ESSAY :WRITE A STORY ABOUT A BAKER WHO FACED SERIOUS CHALLENGES IN HIS INITIAL BUSINESS BUT EVENTUALLY FLOURISHED AND BECAME SUCCESSFUL.

BEGIN YOUR STORY AS FOLLOWS: The loaves of breads were finally ready to be taken out from the oven when suddenly.....

NARRATIVE ESSAY :WRITE A STORY ABOUT A SEAMSTRESS WHO MADE A GRAVE MISTAKE ON HER CLIENT'S MATERIAL..

WRITE A STORY ABOUT A SEAMSTRESS WHO MADE A GRAVE MISTAKE ON HER CLIENT'S MATERIALS.

BEGIN YOUR STORY AS FOLLOWS:"My heartiest apology for the damage of these materials.....
 

NARRATIVE ESSAY:WRITE A STORY ABOUT A DISCPLINARY TEACHER WHO FACE RETALIATIONS FROM STUDENTS DUE TO HER STRICT ATITTUDE.


The teacher walked into the classroom and abruptly the class turned silent.The class monitor, Haziq stood up and ordered the class to stand up.’Good morning teacher Rozita’.The same greeting  was followed by 36 students who started to show some nervousness and uneasiness.Then teacher Rozita’s  voice crackled with anger.’Everyday when I passed through this class,I can hear laughters,giggles,shoutings  talking and nothing else but full of noises,this is worse than Selayang wet market.’The class turned into a cemetery,not even a sound until you can hear a pin drops.An angry frown creased from her forehead and she began slowly walked to the class monitor.Haziq’s face pointed to the floor.He stood rooted to the ground,not even a word coming out from his mouth.Frightening thoughts raced through his mind.He was completely speechless.

Suddenly,teacher rozita lost her senses. She knew that Haziq was behind all the messes she had earlier. Her car was scratched and somebody purposely threw some bad eggs  on her car's roof.Her face was contorted with rage and fury.She had enough of Haziq's nonsense. Then she ordered everybody to get out of the classroom.She ordered the males to stand up under the blazing of the sun. The females to carry the chairs and sit in rows under the same heat. She wanted the male students to tell her who scratch her car and who threw the bad eggs on her car's roof.An hour has passed and still not even one student admitted the offence. One of the female students,Dayana could not take it anymore sitting under the blazing sun, she has passed out and  was carried into the classroom.

Two hours has passed and still none of the boys admitted. Teacher Rozita ordered the female students to carry the chairs into the classroom. She has totally lost her patience. Finally she called Haziq, Mat Jawi, Jali and Stopa to move further to the middle of the field while the rest proceeded walking back to the classroom.She told them if any one of them admitted the offences, then all of them could  go back to the classroom.

Suddenly teacher Rozita's name was announced through the paging system. She was asked to report to the Principal's room.She walked briskly to the Principal's room while the four boys went to the parking bay and searched for her car.They took out two long nails and pierced into the two front wheels. They hated teacher Rozita for her ego and  no nonsense atittudes. Then they walked back to the classroom pretended nothing happen.

The bell shrielled and teacher rozita's teaching period was over. The whole class clapped in joy as almost every student in the class did not like her presence.Mat Jawi  saw  teacher Rozita drove out from the parking bay. She seemed to be in a hurry. He slowly whispered to Stopa beside him and pointed at the moving vehicle driven by teacher Rozita. Apparently, their maths teacher, Puan Sabariah told the class that she had to rush to PPD Kota Bharu meeting  an officer in charge of  examination. She has to drive fast because she has to be at the office within one hour.

Soon the bell rang and everybody was dismissed. Haziq and his friends were at the cybercafe when Farini came in and told them that teacher Rozita was in coma. Her car went out of control and burst in the middle of Salor -Kota Bharu highway. She is now at Intensive Care Unit at USM,Kubang Krian. Her condition was serious.
Haziq and his friends were speechless and all of them went home feeling quilty and regretted for their stupid actions.

They were not sure of their next of action tomorrow morning but the four of them were speechless and hiding in fear. They were thinking of probable consequence the next morning.

FARINI

SMP PEREMPUAN,PASIR MAS

NARRATIVE ESSAY:WRITE A STORY ABOUT A DICPLINARY TEACHER WHO HAS TO FACE RETALIATIONS FROM HER STUDENTS AS A RESULT OF HER STRICT ATITTUDE.

WRITE A STORY ABOUT A DICPLINARY TEACHER WHO HAS TO FACE RETALIATIONS FROM HER STUDENTS AS A RESULT OF HER STRICT ATITTUDE.
BEGIN YOUR STORY AS FOLLOWS:

The teacher walked into the classroom and abruptly the class turned silent..

NARRATIVE ESSAY:WRITE A STORY ABOUT A YOUNG GIRL WHOSE HOUSE WAS ON ATTEMPTED ROBBERY

Write a story about a young girl whose house was on  attempted robbery.

Begin your story :Lina was nervous when the door opened…
Lina was nervous when the door opened . She decided to crawl and hid behind a wooden cupboard. . Panic started to engulf her . She felt a wave of fear rushing through her . Somewhere upstairs a hinge creaked as the door opened . Then came the sound of walking boots on the wooden floor . She felt a chill ran dawn her spine . Her parents and siblings were not at home as they were at grandma's home attending a 'tahlil feast' . In fact Lina's mum just call and told her that they were on the way home and would be arriving  in  half an hour time . Beads of cold sweets . started to drip from her forehead as she caught a glimpse of two dark skinned and tall  intruders were trying to enter her parent's master bedroom . How Lina wish her parent are here . The cold black night pierced her very nervous bones.She was paralysed with fear.She could not commands her leg to move .
      
Lina desperately searched for her handphone . She look at every nook and   corner but was unable to locate it.She recalled  vividly and finally she remembered her handphone was o the top of one of the drawers in the kitchen . It was somewhere on the cabinet near the sink. The question is how can she walk slowly downstairs grab  her mobile phone then  open the main door and scream for help . Her fingers trembled  and she could feel the drumbeat of her heart . She was at loss for words . It is a matter of life and death for her . Without tinge of doubt , she sprinted downstairs opened up the main door and scream for help.The two  intruders were busy ransacking the room.When they  heard the scream, they were panicked . Fortunately Lina saw flashes of light from  a vehicle that she was familiar with. Lina knew it was her father's mercedes . She quickly ran to her mum and hugged her while her eyes were puffy and red . She told her dad about the intruders . Her dad quickly called  the police and at the same time alerted the neighbourhood . Within minutes the house was blockaded with many neighbours,rest of the residents  and friends .

The intruders were holding bags of cash and jewelleries . The blood drained from their face when they heard the siren from the police patrol cars. Their eyes flashed with anger and resentment recalling how could they failed in this robbery .  Their hair stood on end thinking how they could escape . The police use the loud-hailers directing the intruders to give up and showed themselves . There were many onlookers waiting to have a glimpse of these intruders …….

Please continue the ending by using  appropriate colourful phrases,idioms and strong vocabulary.

GOOD LUCK.

NARRATIVE ESSAY:WRITE A STORY ABOUT A SINGLE MOTHER WHO FACED MISFORTUNES

Write a story about a single mother who faced misfortunes in her life.

Begin the story as follows: The sound of speeding wheels made me turned my head sharply…..

The sound of speeding wheels made me turned my head sharply. I rushed out from my home to check what actually happened.I could see the broken car plate number on the roadside.I was speechless when I saw my mum was lying on the road motionless.Blood profusely oozing out from her head,body and arms.She was badly injured. My caring mother and my only sweetheart  lay unconsciously on the roadside. I quickly went over and hugged her.I whispered to her ear,"Dont leave me mum,please".My eyes were puffy and red. l shouted loudly to get for some help. I could see drain of blood fused out from her head. Tears welled up in my eyes and began rolling down my cheeks like rivulets. A few passers-by and neighbours rushed out and calmed me. Then one of the caring neighbours quickly called the ambulance. After a tiring wait, at last the  ambulance arrived.The police patrol cars,two of them arrived a few minutes later and guarded the massive traffic jam.Traffic was held at a standstill as there were many curious onlookers slowed down their vehicles and wanted to know the cause of this massive traffic jam.One of the police officers was trying hard to locate a genuine witness.I told him that my mum wanted to buy some items for cooking.She always cycled to a nearby mini market about few hundred metres ahead.So that moment was too tragic for her.I told the officer that she was a victim of hit and run.The officer then recorded my statement and picked up the broken plate number on the roadside as an evidence.I could not determine whether it was a car,a small lorry or a van that rammed my mum.But looking at the damaged bicycle,i could see the impact was great.I suspected that it must be a one tonne lorry.

 I quickly followed my mum on the ambulance after my statements were recorded by the police officer.The traffic was massive and the siren from the ambulance really helped easing the distressing situation.We reached the Raja Perempuan Zainab Hospital in Kota Bharu about half an hour later.My mum was straight away stretchered to to the Emergency Unit.Tears welled down again like rivulets from my eyes.I could feel the drumbeat of my heart.I prayed to the Almighty that my mum would be operated successfully.The nurse told me that my mum has to be operated immediately to take out the blood clotting near her brain.My heartbeat  wanted to explode when i heard this distressing news. The thing that i could do right now is  pray and pray.I hope the Almighty would listen to my prayer. The operation took a longer time so i decided the best place to go is the nearby mosque. Copius tears flowed down again on my reddish cheeks and i waited patiently the call from the operation room.

 My heart missed a beat when the doctor called out my name.He slowly pulled me to a side wall and conveyed the distressing news.I broke down after being told that my mum’s chance of survival was at its lowest.I was at loss for words and felt as if my heart had been ripped from my body.But as a slave to the Almighty,I accepted whatever  fate to be drop upon me.I continued my prayer and hope for a miracle to happen.I was allowed to enter the operation room.My mind was disturbed when I saw there were  many wires around my mother's body.I was on the brink of tears. I knew my mum was in a critical condition.
  I couldn’t  believe this would happen to me.I have always dreamed that when I graduated and could secure a good job,I  would  take my mum and  travel to all those places that she has been dreaming of..I just wanted  to see her smiles every minutes.Naturally there would certainly be no replacement for my mum.But with this ill-fated incidence,,every plan that I had arrange for my mum would  certainly turned to nightmare.I would never have anymore chance to be with her or rather travel with her.So I guessed time was so cruel.I  only have a little more time to spend with her.I could see her sufferings,  agony and pains.I tried my best  to  fill up the remaining time saturating her with happiness although my heart was tapped with thorns and misery.I could see her tears falling down from her reddish cheecks.It was so heart breaking to watch all these.

   I spent my whole time and not a second leaving her alone.I  immediately called the nurse when I saw the heart beat machine stopped.It was positioned to zero.It meant my mum was no more alive.Tears welled down my eyes.My eyes were puffy and reddish  and  brimming with tears.That was a tragic moment.for me.  The doctor rushed through trying  his best to save my mum.A nurse has asked me to leave the ward.I felt the adrenalin was going all over my nerves.I waited outside certainly with high hope that  a miracle would happen.

The doctor then  told me that my mum was in coma.He further added,’If your mum is conscious in the next 24 hours,the chances is she would be paralysed’.Although I was sad to hear that news but I accepted reluctantly.

So I waited patiently…….and ready to face whatever the consequences..

ZA AND FATIN-MAAHAD MUHAMMADI PASIR MAS

NARRATIVE ESSAY:WRITE A STORY ABOUT A CONFLICT IN FRIENDSHIP WHICH ENDED WITH TRAGEDY.

Write a story about a conflict in friendship which ended with a tragedy.
Begin your story as follows: I saw the car rammed her on the left side.She fell down motionless….. 

Then, I tried to get closer and closer and my eyes laid head over heels into her eyes. I was drowned into her pain and agony. I grabbed her into my warm hug with the slightest hope that it would help to soothe the pain, agony and hurt that she has suffer.I did not realize a  few droplets of my copious tears  rolled down on her cheeks. She picked up all her strength to open up  her exhausted eyelids and her weaker hands  reached my cheeks slowly wiping  away my tears.Anna was really hurt and honestly her pain was excruciating.  

The public was stunned and nobody wanted to interfere on  this tragic moment.I sounded to her ‘ You are thick headed  Anna ! How could you just turn back?’That burly beast tried hard to snatch the handbag but was in vain.That left Anna sinking in her boots bearing all the head and body injuries. She was dumbfounded. She  just held tight the handbag  when that  burly beast with that sinister disposition wanted to pull  the beautiful handbag that dangled  on her shoulder.

I saw Anna lost her breath.My heart was palpitating wildly and I could feel the adrenaline was rushing through my veins. I screamed at the top of my voice yelling her name and I could feel my fingers trembled.The ambulance finally arrived after that long wait.Then, my family and I dashed to the hospital.I checked thoroughly all the  phone numbers available  in my handphone.I was desperate and hoping that her parents phone number would appear. ‘I got it!’ Those three words which  came out from my mouth unexpectedly. Without any further hesitation, I called the number. I could hear her mother Mrs. Edward cried her heart out.

Soon,,I noticed a woman walked briskly with her distressing face headed  towards me. I guessed  she was Anna’s mother. I totally hit the nail on the head.It was her . Again, she was sobbing her heart out. My tears also dogged to stop. Hours flew by, I could feel the drumbeat of my heart. The doctor came out from the emergency room and told us the news finally.  Anna was in comatose situation.There was too much blood drained out.Her inner strength was superb.  ‘Oh, thank God,at least there is a miracle .’Mrs. Edward exclaimed. I could see mountain of woefulness were taken off from her back. She  hugged and thanked me for umpteen times.
Both of us proceeded to the emergency room to have a glimpse  on Anna. ‘I am sorry Anna’ I asked for her forgiveness. I could see her bright smile although her eyes were closed tightly. My instinct told me that Anna was so fortunate.When I left Anna at the roadside after our argument,she was speechless and dumbfounded.

Then came this burly beast on a motorcycle and snatched her handbag. Without caring for her safety, she crossed the road without looking left and right. Unfortunately  a speeding car rammed her and left her in haste.She  was in excruciating pain and nobody could hear her scream at that time. Anna was bed-ridden for a couple of weeks but our friendship  grew stronger and became everlasting.I had learnt a very valuable  lesson, never ignore a good friend if you have such a small argument.

Months flew by, her laughed and smiled suddenly put an end to the agony that she went through.Now Anna……  


*The ending part is for you to juggle up…..
Write a story about a pensioner who discarded his family, picked up bad habits and damaged his family relationship.
Begin your story as follows: Eric was very disturbed with his  dad’s latest development of playing those gambling cards despite his umpteen promises not to….. 

Eric was very disturbed with dad's latest development playing those gambling cards  despite his umpteen promises not to.His latest attitude made our blood boiled. Then I noticed that my mum was on the brink of tears.She knew that dad would not change after that tragic retirement.Dad was asked to retire early as he was involved in an accident where one of his legs was badly injured and has to be cut.So dad use a stick to assist him walking but he was very much slower.He made a lot of complaints as he found his  manner of walking was  very much slower.Then he befriended an old primary school colleague.They picked up new hobby-fishing.Later they formed a bigger group,eight of them from nearby villages.

 So one evening the eight of them left Besut Jetty at about  6.30p.m.Their mission is  to bring back laden of fish,prawns and crabs.They were supposed to arrive early this morning. The cold morning pierced my nervous  bones. How I missed dad now? I saw mum rooted to the ground and a haze of fear surrounded her. While  my brother and I sat on the sofa, the phone rang. My mother got a call from someone. Tears welled up in her eyes and began rolling down her cheeks like rivulets. Panic started to engulf me and my brother. We could not  do anything because we didnt know what actually   happened. I saw my mother listed something on a piece of  paper.Then mum sounded that dad and a few others were hospitalised. After a while, she was busy packing my father belongings like clothes, tooth brushes and towel. Within  minutes everything was ready.Soon my aunt dropped by  and cooked for us.

We were  still speechless and dumbfounded. "What really happened?"Eric asked with curiousity.My aunty bravely explained the situation.Paralyzed with fear, she could not arrange her words nicely.Then she broke the silence."Your dad was badly injured,beaten by other gamblers".She could not  command her legs to walk and added,"I think he needed you all  badly"

 Weeks passed by,I was at lost for words when dad came back and he was sitting on the wheelchair. His whole body was swollen including his bluish eyes and cheeks.My brother lost for words too. My mum eyes were puffy and red after all the crying. She seemed guilty for leaving us. With those clear signs,I knew that my dad has been beaten by the gamblers. He never changed My guess  was totally true. He had been beaten after gambling by his mean and unfriendly friends. I felt utterly disappointed. My blood boiled because I thought my dad has changed. After that incident, my dad repented. Now he tried to be a better husband and father to us. Tears of joy streamed down my cheeks as my mum always supported him.Credits to my mum because she was such a strong woman and never changed her compassionate feelings towards dad.I wondered whether i could be like mum when i start my matrimonial life later.How I wish I possess mum’s patience characteristics.

Declan Chow

SMJK CHUNG HWA