Wednesday, 17 July 2013

SPM DESCRIPTIVE ESSAY-AN UNFORGETTABLE EXPERIENCE

Sir,this was a real expereince I when I was in USA with my family during last holidays.


Unforgettable Experience
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  Whenever somebody asks to me to relate an experience that I can never forget,millions of different experiences come into my mind.But there is one experience which I would consider to be the most unforgettable and most scary.It was the first time I rode on a  roller coaster.Why? The fear that I felt was  beyond one’s imanigation.Let me recalled  the whole incident.
   
It was a sunny day.I woke up early in the moning . The room that came into my view was unfamiliar.``Weird’’!I thought to myself .``Why couldn`t I recognize my own room ?’’After a while,I remember.``I’m in the United States of America’’
``We are going to Disneyland today.’’My sister’s voice interrupted my thought.I could sense happiness in her cheerful voice.
The moment we reached there ,my sister suggested,``let’s go for a ride on a roller coaster.I’ve heard so much about the roller coaster in Disneyland and I’m dying to try it.’’
``No way,man.I woudn’t want to be scared to death!’’I protested,shaking my head from left to right as hard as I could.
``Come on !Mom,can we go ?’’my sister asked
``No ! No ! No ! ‘’ I answered. But my sister didn’t give in . She begged my mother until my mother said,``Okay why not,both of you should try out .’’
Without wasting a second,my sister dragged me to where the roller coaster was.I was really nervous.
``Wow!’’ my sister cried out loudly,She could not hide her surprise . ``This is the biggest roller coaster I have ever seen.’’I agreed with her in my heart.The big roller coaster that stood in front of me did amaze me.
``Hurry up !’’ urged my sister . I followed her uwillingly.I was even more nervous when I saw the sign CAUTION . My sister led me into a small room where the person-in-charge showed us our seats. I sat  on my seat reluctantly.
``Relax and take it easy !’’ my sister tried to comfort me but it did not help.I sat obediently and managed to flash her a chilly smile.
  After a while,I heard a siren that hurt my ears . The siren warned us that the scary trip was about to begin.I shut m eyes tightly.Both my hands seized the sit so tightly that they ached. I guess I was panic. I tried to calm myself down but in vain.  I heard  people shouting excitedly.They were panic too. They were so eager to begin. Finally , I  felt the roller coaster was moving. It started slowly at first,then faster,faster,and faster as it began  to pick up speed. I felt my stomach turning upside down. It moved so fast that I nearly fell from my seat. I felt my  seat streaming down my face from my forehead. My heart was  pounding loudly.I   regretted taking a ride on this scary thing.

 ``When will this big,stupid caterpillar stop moving? Please slow down ,slow down or I’ll get a heart attack.’’ I pleaded in my heart but the roller coaster refused to listen to my plead. I heard people screaming crazily. It was driving me nuts . The roller coasters shifted  to the left and then to the right. It swayed  so hard that my head knocked against the front seats. When the roller coaster slide down from the highest peak,it was the most frightening part of the whole trip. My eyes were wide open . my heart stopped beating. I screamed at the top of my voice and my shawl was``flying willy in the air’’.
  
The fifteen-minute rode on the roller coaster was like fifteen years to me.  My  face was as pale as a corpse when I came down from the roller coaster. I buried my face in my hands because I felt the world was spinning. My father and mother rushed towards me when they sensed something was wrong with me. My whole body was  trembling  and my hands were  icy cold. I opened my mouth to speak but nothing came out. From that moment on,whenever people mention roller coaster, a chill runs through my spine. I think that ride on the roller coaster was the most unforgettable experience in my life.

NATASYA ZAKARIA,
4 ibnu sina ……..

2 comments:

  1. The person who wrote this. Wow, I was laughing as I tried to relate my experience of being on a rollercoaster with your's. You actually could write this with quite some detail. I thought fright must have wipe off pretty much of one senses when the adrenaline rushes in. Truly an unforgettable experience of yours.

    Thanks for your recount!

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