Sunday, 23 June 2013

NARRATIVE ESSAY:WRITE A STORY BEGINING WITH:NATASYA WAS VERY SURE THAT SHE DIDNT DO IT...

WRITE AN ESSAY BEGINING WITH:NATASYA WAS VERY SURE THAT SHE DIDNT DO IT

Natasya was very sure that she didn't do it. She tried to explained it but Miss Raudah didn't trust her. She had no idea who took the money. She could not hold back her tears when the teacher accused her stealing the money.
The story began  when Miss Raudah, Natasya's English teacher entrusted her to keep an eye on her  purse. Then, the teacher went to the ladies and left Natasya alone in the class. When Maria passed the class, she saw Natasya sat lonely while studying and a black elegant stylish purse beside her. Maria had  an idea to frame on Natasya.She was so jealous of Natasya since the first day Natasya reported to school.
Indeed Maria was a jealous girl.She envied that Natasya always being praised by the teachers. Maria was considered as a wet blanket and sometimes labelled as a black sheep in her class.Nobody in the class liked her. Then, she entered the class and spoke to Natasya. She told Natasya that someone wanted to see her outside. Natasya  immediately stood up and went outside. Maria was so happy that Natasya believed her.Immediately she  took a lot of money from the purse and put it into Natasya's bag. When Maria was taking the money, she didn't relised that Aliya saw her from a small window on the other side of the class.
 Aliya tried to leave the place secretly but Maria stopped her. Maria quickly held Aliya's hand and said "hey ! Just pretend that you didn't know anything about this." Aliya got scared and nodded her head.A few minutes later, Natasya entered the class and continued her reading.Then Miss Raudah came into the class to take her purse back and thanked Natasya. While walking out of the class, Miss Raudah found  out that the zip where she put the cash in was unzipped.She went back to Natasya and said, " Oh gosh ! where is my money ?".Then she asked Natasya. Natasya denied taking the the money.Miss Raudah was a bit mad and told herthat she had to refer the case to the Principal. Then, Maria came in and told  Miss Raudah that she saw Natasya unzipped the bag and took the cash.

The things was made worst when Miss Raudah threatened to take Natasya to see the Principal.So the three of them went and see the Principal. Miss Raudah reported about her lost money.Then Maria volountered to check Natasya’s bag in her classroom.

The Almighty was the greatest.Maria fell into a drain while running excitedly to get the money from Natasya’s bag.She didn’t realise that Alya had earlier took the money and was on her way to the Principal’s office to hand over the money to Miss Raudah.

 Aliya saw Natasya and she  could not hold back her tears when looking at the innocent Natasya who had been accused.Then Aliya handed over the money to Miss Raudah and explained the chronology of the events.The Principal ordered Maria to quickly come to his office.

Maria was walking in pain and could not hold her tears.She was feeling ashamed and apologised to Miss Raudah and Natasya for the incident. Since that day, Maria moved to another school as she could not take the embarrasment anymore.

AIN AMEERAH
KOTA BHARU,KELANTAN

1 comment:

  1. it's not bad of an essay it would be great if you put in a few proverbs in it but anyways good work there

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