Sunday, 23 June 2013

NARRATIVE ESSAY:WRITE A STORY BEGINING WITH:LINA WAS NERVOUS WHEN THE DOOR OPENED...

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WRITE A STORY BEGINNING WITH:LINA WAS NERVOUS WHEN THE DOOR OPENED….

Lina was nervous when the door opened and she heard clearly her name being called “Cik Haslina, please follow me to the meeting room”. Dato’ Tajul’s secretary, Irena then led the way and told Lina,” You are the last interviewee for today, the fifteenth and I hope this number bring your luck”.”Thank you”, Lina responded without hesitation.
            The meeting room was so cool that Lina could feel her fingers were trembling. There were three gentlemen and ladies, all are waiting eagerly to pose as many questions to Lina. Lina was again nervous she could feel the drumbeat of her heart. Suddenly Dato’ Tajol broke the silence and said, “We thought of hiring you, your academic and curriculum activities suits our requirement but we need to have your commitment, are you willing to work late and travel overseas?”. Lina promptly answered  “Anything you say Dato”
            Lina started her first day work at Mersko Tour and Agency Services wearing a stunning red blouse with a white denim .She looked gorgeous. Dato Tajol told Lina “Irena will be on 90 days maternity leave  and you shall take over her functions from today onwards” Soon the telephone rang and Lina took the message from  Irena’s husband .Indeed Irena was already admitted at Puteri’s Medical Centre at Bandar Baru Kubang Krian.
            Months flew by and Lina was already about 4 months at Mersko Tour and Agency Services. Her relationship with Dato Tajol has been extraordinary. It was no more of an employer and an employee relationship. Lina realize this but she was adamant of continuing this relationship although she knew that Dato Tajol’s son, Ikhwan was also interested in her. It would be foolish for   24 years old pretty lass having an affair with a 55 years old boss. But Lina could not care less. She saw many Malay and Korean dramas potraying such story-lines and in fact many ended with marriage. So Lina was determined to follow suit. She dreamt of having a comfortable house, loving and caring husband and of course with few good children.
            On Sunday morning at her apartment, an unexpected visitor knocked at her door. Lina refused to open up the door when she saw Ikhwan through the peeping glass of her front entrance door. Ikhwan was furious as Lina was adamant to open the door. Ikhwan left the apartment sinking in his boots. He left a small note at the door. It reads “My dad is too old for you, he has four siblings to take care of. I am your definite choice”. Lina could not believe what she saw and quickly tore the note. She knew Ikhwan would do this to her as he had been trying hard to lure Lina. The 26 years old Ikhwan was no match to her as Lina wanted a more stable and matured man to lead her life.
            Lina remembered on her first date with Ikhwan when he spoke about ailing mum. Apparently Ikhwan’s mum is a Dutch lady where Dato Tajol met her at London University 27 years ago. She is bed-ridden now after a heart attack a few years ago.
            This is clearly a first love for Lina and she could imagine the physical sufferings faced by Dato Tajol. She loved Dato Tajol due to his tender and loving care and at the moment Lina felt that nobody could change her opinion on Dato Tajol
            Lina stayed whole day indoor. She spent her rest day reading newspaper, magazines and in between she watched cable television. Lina felt asleep on the sofa when suddenly at about midnight she heard a deaf sound. Her guess was right. It was a familiar sound that she heard before-the sound of an alarm from a car parked at the basement. Then somebody knocked her front door entrance. “Your car alarm system is disturbing other people” her neighbor, Fazleen who just finished her shift work returned and told Lina to quickly rushed to basement. “Thank you Fazleen, I’ll go down and check, give me a few minutes” Lina quipped immediately.
            Lina dashed to the basement and saw a figure was meddling her new Myvi car which Dato Tajol gave to her as a birthday present. Lina was scared to move nearer until suddenly a loud shot was heard. The bullet went through Lina’s head and there Lina was lying motionless. Pool of blood was seen at Lina’s forehead and Lina was still breathing, slowly but she was dying. Soon a crowd gathered and somebody was seen calling an ambulance and a patrol car. There was a figure unknown to the crowd, Ikhwan, he was seen holding a handkerchief weeping quietly and walking away from a crowd.

 Within minutes the ambulance arrived.Lina  was admitted to ICU unit USM Hospital, Kubang Kerian. Her condition was so critical and she was in coma. Dato Tajol was shocked after being told of this tragedy.He  suffered a heart attack and later died.

Detective Aasim Wenger and Detective Alan Cardiff were assigned to investigate on who shot Lina.They started their investigation beginning with the location of this tragedy.They managed to locate some items that were strong proofs belonging to the  suspect. While walking  to the car, they accidentally found a woman’s watch with  mysterious fingerprints on the watch.A check on the DNA sample with the chemistry department confirmed that the fingerprint was none other than Datin Nava Emerton, the late Dato Tajol’s wife.Both Detective Aasim and Alan were puzzled how could a bed-ridden woman like Datin Nava could move around.This make the case very complicated.Soon they were at Dato Tajol’s residence and questioned Datin Nava.Datin Nava denied having invoved with this mysterious case.

Ikhwan  then remembered everything when the handbag she was supposed to give to her mum,she gave it to Hanim,her secretary.Now she knew why Hanim did this to his family. Detective Aasim dashed to Hanim’s apartment and quickly arrested Hanim and her boyfriend.He found a revolver in Hanim’s bedroom,the revolver that her boyfriend used to shoot Lina.Hanim and her boyfriend was then charged and jailed.
 
 After a few months, Lina woke up from her coma.Ikhwan was the first person feeling very happy and he thanked  the Almighty that Lina is now safe.Lina’s friends also said that Ikhwan always visited her during her comatose situation and brought bouquet of flowers and recited holy verses every night.Ikhwan has replaced the place of the late Dato Tajol and he is now the Chief Ececutive Officer of  Mersko Tour and Agency Services

Soon,Lina and Ikhwan were married.Lina has found her true love with Ikhwan.They had beautiful twins.Lina finally achieved her dreamt of having a comfortable house, a loving and caring husband and   good children. Now, she lived happily and safely with her lovely husband, Ikhwan.

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